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UNC
Hello,

Are you inteligent in english?

Do you know proper grammar?


If yes, I'm looking for you to proofread my term paper.

PM me thanks.

RoleConfusion
you're about to do what i did rofl4.gif there was someone here kind enough to proof read my 10 pages paper rofl4.gif dont think she would do that again rofl4.gif
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 5 2005, 04:48 PM)
Hello,

Are you inteligent in english?

Do you know proper grammar?
If yes, I'm looking for you to proofread my term paper.

PM me thanks.
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Renee
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 5 2005, 05:48 PM)
Hello,

Are you inteligent in english?

Do you know proper grammar?
If yes, I'm looking for you to proofread my term paper.

PM me thanks.
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It depends on the subject of the paper, how long it is, and what the grading criteria are. Is the paper in "this is my best work" form, or is it still in rough draft? When is the paper due? Is proofreading all you want, or would you expect some editing, too? Are you willing to pay for it, or would you want it done as a favor?

Not that I'm applying, necessarily. Those are just some of the questions someone would ask before they take the job.
Leen
Have my degree in Language Arts/English

Send me an email (see my profile for specifics) with some details on what all the paper is about, how long it is, and if possible a copy of the project requirements.

Will see what all I can do to help you out....but dont expect miracles if you only give me a day or two
Kenny
QUOTE(Leen @ May 5 2005, 10:33 PM)
Have my degree in Language Arts/English

Send me an email (see my profile for specifics) with some details on what all the paper is about, how long it is, and if possible a copy of the project requirements.

Will see what all I can do to help you out....but dont expect miracles if you only give me a day or two
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she accepts intgold....

UNC
I'll try to answer everyones questions ..

It depends on the subject of the paper, how long it is, and what the grading criteria are.

It is a 9 page paper on Upton Sinclair's The Jungle. The grading criteria is basically based on whether the paper revolves around the thesis and is a reflection of proper grammer, and the best word selection. The paper also has to be in the present tense.

Is the paper in "this is my best work" form, or is it still in rough draft? When is the paper due?

Yes, what I have written is in the best form. I know it's rusty probably but I'm english is not my niche. The paper is due tommorow.

Is proofreading all you want, or would you expect some editing, too? Are you willing to pay for it, or would you want it done as a favor?

Proofreading basically, maybe some slight editing especially during the end where I feel the paper doesnt make much sense and becomes weak in my opinion. Can't pay at the moment, but perhaps I'll be able to make up the favor to you in the future

Basically, I'm ready to turn in what I have, I just would like the rough edges sharped, as if I dont pass this paper I dont graudate..
UNC
lol, i'm still not verified with them still been meaning to get on that , and poor atm... waiting for IT. still....
Leen
how many hours til its due....I can give ua rough going over but dont expect me to fix all the mistakes w/ only a small amount of time
UNC
about 8 hours..

Leen
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 5 2005, 10:56 PM)
about 8 hours..
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can u see my email address in my profile? if yes .... email it - i will see hwat I can do to help
UNC
can't .. PM you. wink.gif
Renee
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 5 2005, 07:46 PM)
I'll try to answer everyones questions ..

It depends on the subject of the paper, how long it is, and what the grading criteria are.

It is a 9 page paper on Upton Sinclair's The Jungle. The grading criteria is basically based on whether the paper revolves around the thesis and is a reflection of proper grammer, and the best word selection. The paper also has to be in the present tense.

Is the paper in "this is my best work" form, or is it still in rough draft? When is the paper due?

Yes, what I have written is in the best form. I know it's rusty probably but I'm english is not my niche. The paper is due tommorow.

Is proofreading all you want, or would you expect some editing, too? Are you willing to pay for it, or would you want it done as a favor?

Proofreading basically, maybe some slight editing especially during the end where I feel the paper doesnt make much sense and becomes weak in my opinion. Can't pay at the moment, but perhaps I'll be able to make up the favor to you in the future

Basically, I'm ready to turn in what I have, I just would like the rough edges sharped, as if I dont pass  this paper I dont graudate..
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Oh my! Due tomorrow? Sure glad you didn't wait until the last minute! If Leen can do it before tomorrow, it sounds like she'd do a great job. I think the best you can hope for in that time line is a spelling/grammar proofread.

Endings really are tough -- almost as tough as beginnings and middles.

If you follow the "tell 'em what you're going to say, say it, then tell them what you said" sort of plan, then read your conclusion again. Does it summarize the major points of your paper and restate your thesis? Those are the functions of the conclusion. If you can't tell that you've done that, then you haven't.

You don't have much time to do any major revisions on the paper, so concentrate on the conclusion, if you can, and try to make it as strong as possible. You should be working with only two or three paragraphs, if that.

Good luck with the paper!

(Edited to correct an error. blush.gif )
Global*Money
MMG is the place for everything tongue.gif
UNC
Ain't that the truth smile.gif

Thanks Leen very much...

Thanks Renee..

Kenny
QUOTE(Renee @ May 5 2005, 11:14 PM)

Endings really are tough -- almost as tough as beginnings and middles.

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I always got bad grades in english/language arts.....BUT

That line is funny to me for some reason...LMAO...

Renee
Hope everything went well, MI. Given a week or two, I could have walked you through that paper without a problem, but I was already fading fast last night and couldn't have taken the time to do a good job. Most people I know wouldn't take on the project with so little time left. Leen's very special.
UNC
He gave me the weekend smile.gif, Now I can hopefully perfect this..

Thank you Leen for the wonderful job. smile.gif
Renee
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 6 2005, 01:25 PM)
He gave me the weekend smile.gif, Now I can hopefully perfect this..

Thank you Leen for the wonderful job. smile.gif
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That's great, MI. dance9bh.gif
Leen
QUOTE(Mistaken Identity @ May 6 2005, 04:25 PM)
He gave me the weekend smile.gif, Now I can hopefully perfect this..

Thank you Leen for the wonderful job. smile.gif
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you're welcome....
good luck
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